Dwight, Maybe you shouldn't look at it as ONE LARGE STORY. Maybe, juuuussst maybe, you could entice us with short chapters, delivered in a timely manner. Divide and conquer so to speak! That way we aren't on your ******, and you'd be moving along with your epic adventure! On the up, or downside, it would leave room for the critiques to come in DURING the penning of your literary masterpiece, rather than at the end. (no matter how diligently I may try to type in Dwightish, it never comes out right...)! Do I need more run-on sentences, cleverer catch phrases, more punctuation, or invent new words????
later, Tom.
